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 Meseli Hastur 
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Post Meseli Hastur
'''Name:''' Meseli Hastur
'''Age:''' twenty-one
'''Race:''' wick
'''Place of Origin:''' Old Rose.

!!!Backstory: Born to the laughing sky clan. Meseli for much of his early life traveled with his parents who worked as Spice traders. His mother was of mugrobi descent and a father of Anaxi birth. Unknown to Meseli his family had also been running opium and other illegal items into the country. At the age of sixteen he had his world taken out from under him while outside Vienda when a patrol of Seventen brutally killed his family leaving him orphaned.Though the reason was never explicitly stated many believe the Seventen that had led the attack had set up a deal with his family to smuggle opium so long as he got a cut...apparently they skipped out on payment. His clan stunned by the brutality of the attack found a distraught soul that turned his back upon the world losing himself in mindless existence.
Time went by and Meseli made a living as a freelance drug runner and messenger for those willing to pay within Old Rose. Now he has 'sworn off illicit activities that may provoke those nasty blokes' In reality he now smuggles drugs for the highest bidder while posing as an entertainer. Meseli sadly has also developed an addiction to stimulants and various hallucinogens. This has resulted in him having rather erratic behavior.


!!!Personality: Meseli is a veritable melange of personality types. A self proclaimed mystic and entertainer he peddles away trinkets and potions that normally have little use. Of course Meseli also has the odd habit of drinking his own concotions. Many of which contain some form of Chrove heart and Apah.While intoxicated with his own 'potions' He tends to state incoherent things or claim absurd facts as his mind blends reality with madness. When off the drugs he tends to be irritable and mean spirited towards galdori.
During business deals Meseli seeks to do things as fast as possible and be payed as quickly as feasible. He is known for being quick to claim a deal and take cash as fast as possible.
When asked about his family or why he is no longer with his clan, he simply replies with a mean spirited remark claiming it to be his business alone.


!!!Physical Description: Tall and ungainly Meseli looks something like a scarecrow. Dressed in gaudy colors at all times and with a wild mane of hair streaked with whatever colors he should have in it. His features are long and pointed when combined with his large dark eyes they make him look almost starved. Though this may be the truth he denies much help and will work only for cash.


!!!Inventory:
-A black and white Whice he fondly calls Yorik
-A Kenser that he has had for several years he calls Tendel
-The beaten up cart that he has had to his name since the death of his parents upon the side of it is a painting of a Chrove dancing with a Hingle.

Inside the Cart:
-Faked trinkets such as a lucky Hatcher's Foot and various cures for the ill. Normally just something mixed with Chrove heart or opium.
- Various herbs spices and dried plants used to make many of his 'potions'
- a hidden compartment to hide Opium and other drugs(OneXOne foot space)
-Four shills. (He calls it his life savings.)
- a gold ring worn by his mother
-bedroll
-Pile of assorted clothes and costumes that he wears depending upon his mood.
-A set of camping kettles and pots.

Weapons:
*Dagger sheathed on his ankle
*A bag of caltrops
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Stuff:
*a bag of ground Chrove heart(For his health)
*His mother's gold ring kept on his middle finger.

!!!Career
Peddler/courier

*Haggle
*Bluffing
*Herbology

!!!Goals Meseli has no true plans. He has come to be wary of the Bad brothers and several low ranking criminals with Old Rose after bad business and is currently trying to avoid sad 'nasty blokes' as much as is good for his health.


Last edited by Meseli Hastur on November 25th, 2008, 3:13 am, edited 2 times in total.

November 24th, 2008, 8:41 pm
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Post Re: Meseli Hastur
Hi Meseli :)
This is looking like a good start. He seems like a funny guy...very crazy :D Should be fun to play!

A couple things. The word for people from Anaxas is "Anaxi" and from Mugroba is "Mugrobi"; "galdori" is not capitalized, but "Seventen" is. There are a couple grammatical errors too, so I'd appreciate if you'd give this a once-over.

Secondly, I'm gonna need a bit more in terms of your backstory. Where were his parents killed, and why by Seventen (who rarely bother with the affairs of wicks and rarely murder en masse)? Also, if he's in Old Rose, he wouldn't need to pose as anything. There is no law enforcement besides Silas Hawke's Bad Brothers. Drug runners are ok as long as they pay their taxes. Now, if he's working for a rival Vein or operating on his own, that could make for some interesting RP, but you should include an explanation for why he's not working for Hawke. It's quite dangerous.

There's also no explanation for why he's no longer with Laughing Sky. You say he was born into it, but that he traveled with his parents, and there's no mention of the tribe from there on out. What happened?

If your character is too apathetic to have goals, you could list some things he wants to avoid (like, for example, getting nabbed by Hawke's men or losing his business or his mind), just to give you some sort of starting point for RP.

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November 25th, 2008, 2:44 am
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Post Re: Meseli Hastur
Right onto cute avi BTW.


November 25th, 2008, 2:46 am
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Eh...never mind the crazy man... :oops:
Right fixed. I think...That should be about right.


November 25th, 2008, 3:08 am
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Hee heee... ok. Cool Meseli, you're approved, thank you! Have fun posting :)

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November 25th, 2008, 3:54 am
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