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 Carnyae Fyleon 
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'''Name:''' Carnyae “Carn” Fyleon (pronounced Cahrn-yee-ay Fill-ee-on).
'''Age:''' 19.
'''Race:''' wick.
'''Place of Origin:''' Old Rose Harbor.
'''Occupation:''' Artisan/Entertainer.

!!!Backstory
Almost 20 years ago, the 20-something-year old Desosan and Vapri Fyleon were ending their long day of dancing in a dusty loft of the Black Dove Tavern at the Old Rose Harbor. The two have heard the rumors of the disgusting lice-ridden mats which were used for beds and decided to bring their own patchwork quilts. With booming laughter and roaring talk in the background, the pregnant Vapri went into labor on one of the quilts they brought. Hours later, a baby Carnyae Fyleon squealed and cried as his sweating mother cradled him in her arms and Desosan was down at the bar ordering a round of drinks, exclaiming the entire time with a proud smile that he was now a father.

The two parents raised Carn on the road and various cities as they traveled with Falling Stones, the tribe Vapri was born into and Desosan was now a part of. Carn’s father, Desosan, was a natural acrobat and his mother, Vapri, was a strong and graceful dancer. The two constantly taught Carn different acrobatic stunts and dances. The teachings led up to teaching how to leap and jump off of great heights without breaking any limbs or injuring himself in the process and walking lightly, not causing any sound. Aside from acrobatics, Carn’s mother taught him the way of the dance. The dances included body movement, scarves, and beginner illusions. In the dance, the brightly colored scarves shaped the dancer into the form he was portraying in the dance. If the dance were to be graceful and slow the scarves would form a graceful bird. If the dance was upbeat and energetic, the scarves would form a banded wolf ready for the hunt. Besides the scarves being used in dancing they are also used in acrobatics, allowing the performer to appear dainty and graceful.

Desosan and Vapri continued teaching Carn their professions and six years later came the twins, Myno and Ado. Two years after the birth of the twins Eris was born, Carn’s favorite little sister. The six of them continued traveling with Falling Stone. Carn, Vapri, and Desosan had managed to rack in enough money from their trio performances to purchase an additional caravan - once the twins were born and realized they didn’t have enough room in their now too small caravan - for the children.
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Carn may be athletic and his body may be carved for dancing and acrobatics but it isn’t what he wants to pursue. He’d much rather sit, huddled by the campfire, and craft knick-knacks, dolls, and puppets and twinker/repair camera spectras, clocks, and the rare type writer. He enjoys making cute dolls for Eris and watching her flow with happiness as she plays with them. Though this is something he wishes to do, he's sometimes ashamed of it. Its not something his father would approve of. He’s been secretly making dolls, knick-knacks, and puppets and selling them once they reach a town or city before he performs, hoping to earn enough money to purchase his own caravan and begin his own life and travels. One thing he can’t bear to think of is leaving Eris and Vapri. He adores his little sister and his mother, they've always nudged him to do his own thing but its not something his father or brothers would approve of.
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He continues to live with his family, but a new member has found its way into the family and into Carn’s trouser pocket. A mousey brown Hingle with black stripes scurried into one of Carn’s trouser pockets as a fellow Falling Stone wick was attempting to capture the poor creature and eat it for supper. Carn cooed the little Hingle and calmed it as the cute furball was quivering and shaking in his pocket. The wick who was about to catch witnessed Carn getting along with the Hingle, “humph”-ing to himself, and left his supper to be Carn’s new pet. As Carn began nurturing and caring for the Hingle, he later named her Eleis and looped a thin leather cord around her neck to serve as a collar. The two have been inseparable ever since.

!!!Personality
Carn is an all around sweet guy with a slight perverted sense of humor. He can be secretive but with good intentions. He isn’t judgmental but he’ll scale a stranger out and attempt to know them. If they don’t rub off well on him he’ll simply put them down gently but if it doesn’t get through their skull he’ll straight up tell them. He's loud and assertive, not afraid to do anything, but this is what he appears to be to people when they see him performing or jabbering and causing mischief with his friends. When he’s around his baby sister or by himself he’s soft spoken, a tad shy, and admires all things cute and feminine. He can be quite honest and blunt which put some people off, but makes up for it with his kindness and humor.

He enjoys making knick knacks and playing with fire [shaping and morphing it slightly with touches of magic -- in other words, he's a pyromaniac], tinkering and repairing broken technology, and playing with Eleis and his little sister. He despises taking care of his siblings while his parents are working the sheets - the entire caravan rattles and people glance over at Carn with raised brows and funny expressions, and few of his friends wink and merely laugh at him.

When he’s spacing out he tends to finger the rings and gage on his left ear, but when he’s working on a small project or doing anything with his hands he’ll chew on his bottom lip or flick his tongue/chew on the rings on his cheek [inside of his mouth, of course].

He does his on thing on his own pace. If something is asked of him, he’ll do it but not as quick as others wish.
He doesn’t get as much sleep as he would like, but he sleeps at most 5 hours and the rest of the night when everyone is asleep is spent out by the campfire, either scribbling into the dirt, humming, tinkering with new objects, or petting Eleis as she sleeps in his pouch.

!!!Physical Description
Standing at an astounding 6’ 3”, Carn is a tall and lean young man with dark, sun kissed skin [dark tan]. Round and almond-shaped deep green eyes hide beneath a black mane. His hair parts above his left eye and hangs over his right eye, down past his chin. A strip of hair hangs to the left of his left eye, in front of his ear. Behind his left ear a section of hair is sheared off close to the scalp, parallel to the crown of his head. The back of his hair is chopped short and layered down to where his head meets his neck, a strip of hair trickling down his neck and back, wispy and tail-like, and rests between his shoulder blades. A thin, straight nose, creamy caramel, thin lips, and softly chiseled jaw grace his face. Two rings pierce his left cheek and three rings pierce the side cartilage of his left ear. A hollow plug [gage] pierces the bottom lobe of the same ear.

Softly chiseled muscles ripple across his arms, legs, abdomen, and back. His long, thin hands appear almost dainty but are strong and skilled from multiple performances performed on dirt roads to concrete pavement. Down along his back, beneath his shoulder blades, is a tattoo of a circle with a connecting triangle pointing down to a dot and another dot to the right of the circle.

!!!Inventory
- Weapons -
*Pocket Knife
* Dagger with its own sheath.

-Satchel-
* Flint.
* Berries [edible and medical, all labeled].
* Pendant on a leather thong which his mother gave to him.
* Cloth, leather, and metal scraps.
* Thread and needles.
* Leather pouches.
* Sellable knick-knacks, dolls, and puppets.
* Numerous hand painted earrings, tapers, and hoops.

-Coin Purse-
* A few dozen forts and tallies.
* Folded pieces of illegible writing on parchment.

-Trouser Pouch-
* Eleis, the brown and black striped Hingle.

!!!Skills
-Spells-
* Lvl 2 Illusions.
* Lvl 1 Sparks.
* Lvl 1 Matches.
* Lvl 1 Lift.

-Tricks-
* Lvl 2 Acrobatics.
* Lvl 2 Minor Levitation.

!!!Goals
* Purchase his own caravan and kenser.
* Break away from his present life and begin a new life and travels.
* Find someone or something he can relate and talk to freely.
* To survive this new life he pursues.


October 23rd, 2009, 6:51 pm
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Post Re: Carnyae Fyleon
Welcome to Thorns! Thanks for submitting your character sheet. We mods will be discussing and get back to your shortly! ;D

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Post Re: Carnyae Fyleon
1. Please check the naming conventions on the wiki for the names mentioned in your backstory and throughout your character sheet. Names in Anaxas are generally more European in nature than names from the surrounding countries. You can find this section of the wiki here:

http://thornsbook.com/wiki/pmwiki.php?n ... onventions

The names you have for even your character's parents are closer to Gioran than Anaxi in style.

2. Gauged piercings do not exist in this setting and/or culture. While it's fine to have unusual piercings as a wick, they wouldn't be referenced by gauges.

3. There is no need to mention levels of magic in the skills section of your sheet. While you're allowed to have reached an "intermediate" level of magic in an area, please keep in mind the realistic limitations of specializing in one area over another.

Vitapedia wrote:
If your wick specializes in one area of tricks (such as Pickpocketing), they might have reached an advanced stage on that particular trick without being advanced in other tricks. Use your discretion when deciding how advanced you want your wick to be when it comes to certain tricks. (Remember to avoid overpowering your character.)


4. Hingle does not need to be capitalized as it is a common noun in Thorns. It may be a little unrealistic to put a collar on something the size of a hamster, at least for long periods of time if at all.

5. Lastly, while making the above edits, please check over your grammar, especially in terms of staying in past tense.

Thanks!

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