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(L10, night) Not Strangers
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Fion Smith
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Joined: August 16th, 2008, 9:48 am Posts: 1150 Location: Sydney, Australia Real Name: Alexandra IC Race: Human IC Age: 25 IC Gender: Female
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 (L10, night) Not Strangers
The pub is quiet, dimly lit. The wooden floors creak from the cold, streaked with mud from the inclement weather. The bar room is cool and clean but for a fine layer of dust in the corners and brown footprints around the sodden doormat. The place feels like a loudness that lost its will and became mute. The patrons spread themselves thinly, keeping distant from each-other, perhaps unwilling to talk. Rain beats against the window, keeping the silence from swallowing them all. There is only one table with two. A man and a woman, looking at the knots in the wood in front of them. His eyes are red as wine, her hair is black as midnight. They do not speak. He's older by at least a decade, with lines around his face that seem drawn by pain or hard living. He hasn't looked up at the woman before him since they sat down, a half hour ago. Perhaps they are both waiting, there seem to be no words lying patient on his tongue. He breathes deep and exhales loudly. The sound is a sigh or a tired prayer. She looks up first, her eyes tracing his face, looking for something. She licks her lips and glances around them. Whatever it is she's hoping for, it's not there. Her hair is still damp from the rain. The air inside is too cold and still to dry it properly. She cranes up at the rafters, swears under her breath. They could be lovers, but it's not longing in her gaze. Perhaps there's some tenderness hiding beneath the frustration. They could be two people who knew each other long ago, too dissimilar in appearance to be related, too involved in their silence to be merely acquainted. He's still more interested in his wine but he must know she's watching. He waits for some undefinable moment, some inspiration, before he speaks. “I killed him.” He whispers, looking at her and then down at his glass. He shifts his chair back, leans his arms on the table. She stills, looking at him, then the window. The rain becomes louder and louder until she cannot say anything and still be heard. She shakes her head, blinks away the thoughts. Her hands clench into fists in her lap. Then she lets them go back on the table, flat. Her left hand touches his right. The rain dwindles to the background again. “Good.” She says. She pulls away and reaches for her drink, seemingly satisfied that her single word caries the meaning and reassurance of a whole conversation. Slowly his mouth curls down against a jutted jaw, and his nasal breath comes on loud and steady. He doesn't look up, instead letting his shaking wrinkles make silent testament behind a veil of thick locks. He might have said "thank you", but the patter of rain dissolved the sound.
_________________ My other characters are Calliope Bard. and Angus Worthing.
Quote: "We have a girl on the inside but... I need someone with a bit more..." He eyed Fion up and down, pursing his lips. "Substance."
Last edited by Fion Smith on February 20th, 2010, 2:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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February 20th, 2010, 1:35 pm |
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Ivan Mottoni
"Doctor"
Joined: October 6th, 2008, 6:33 am Posts: 851 Location: London Real Name: Edward IC Race: Human IC Age: 34 IC Gender: Male
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Here's a beautiful rendition of the scene Cart made:
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_________________ IC: Ivan Mottoni; OOC: Edward Hicks cheezopath.com, my deviantart The Doctor Is In. Body count: 4 I also play Crius Levent and Lochlan Greensmythe
19:02:47 ‹Wendy› where's Ed when I need him god damnit.
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February 20th, 2010, 2:27 pm |
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Gannon Oranos
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Joined: October 12th, 2009, 10:58 am Posts: 321 IC Race: Human IC Age: 24 IC Gender: Male
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 Re: (L10, night) Not Strangers
Oh my goodness. Freaking chilly, man. Both the lit and the art. Really, I'd kind of wondered if Ivan had told anyone. It sort of surprises me that he outright told Fi (though I could be missing something, story-wise.)
Augh, awesome.
_________________ "Eat it"
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February 20th, 2010, 5:58 pm |
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Carmine Lisette
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Joined: September 16th, 2009, 7:54 pm Posts: 173 Real Name: Ash. Alias: satyrtoast. IC Race: Passive IC Age: 23 IC Gender: Male
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Oh, damn.
This is wonderful.
_________________ pretty vacant.
it's also havek & eden.
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